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June 30, 2005

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OK. It's not bad. I know it's fiction, but perhaps I was reading it with a too critical eye. There were good parts but moments of unbelievablility. I'll elaborate in person more.

"Unbelievablility?" Care to see the pictures..?

"Frivolous build up???" Last time I ask for anyone's opinion! LOL

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