I have uploaded a piece of fiction I wrote called "Expressions." It can be read at the following link. Feel free to leave feedback, I would appreciate the constructive criticism.
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OK. It's not bad. I know it's fiction, but perhaps I was reading it with a too critical eye. There were good parts but moments of unbelievablility. I'll elaborate in person more.
Posted by: Bruce | July 01, 2005 at 05:14 PM
"Unbelievablility?" Care to see the pictures..?
Posted by: Creepy | July 01, 2005 at 07:24 PM
"Frivolous build up???" Last time I ask for anyone's opinion! LOL
Posted by: Creepy | July 06, 2005 at 07:48 PM